Showing posts with label nominations. Show all posts
Showing posts with label nominations. Show all posts

Friday, April 29, 2022

On My Poetry Forum for Review: Plasma

Become one with the dynamic universe! 

This poem is a scientific musing about the spirit molecule and the universe. Plasma will be placed in the upcoming chapbook called: Eclipse. Plasma is currently on My Poetry Forum for review. Read it for yourself and leave a comment. 

If you like science and spirituality, then this poem will fit in your laboratory of ideas. 
 
This poem is being moved to Undawnted's YouTube Channel.
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Sunday, December 26, 2021

On My Poetry Forum Poems to be Retired for 2022

The votes are in. Your voice has been heard. The tallies have been calculated! 

It appears that eight, not the five originally opined, will be removed.

Here is the list of poems that will be retired from circulation on My Poetry Forum for the coming new year: 

Have you casted your vote yet? 

Poems that resonate with Undawnted's community tend to remain in the public eye for longer durations than those poems that do not. 5-Star Reviews, Nominations, and other positive factors keep Ms. Mullan's creative endeavors live on the internet, as she sees the interactivity as a sign of satisfaction among her audience.

You still have time to leave a review and vote with your stars. More poetry will be available in the coming months. Watch for your chance to interact with Undawnted's resident poet, DL Mullan. 

 

Have a great and creative day.  

 

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See also: The End... Poems No Longer Available on My Poetry Forum, but a New Year of Authenticity Begins!

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Wednesday, October 20, 2021

Movie Review: Atonement, but What Are We Being Redeemed For? Human Frailty?

Atonement is a mystery that unfolds first in a child's mind and as the story progresses the audience learns the truth about what actually occurred all those years ago. 

What would happen if you had a chance to right a mistake? Would you do it as soon as you discovered your error? Or, would you wait decades after everyone is dead to confess? 

These questions are what people should ask themselves.

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Atonement

IMDB

*****Spoiler Time*****  

The Breakdown

When a series of misinterpretations of a young girl puts her sister's love for a servant's son in jeopardy, what will she do to right a wrong she caused?

Briony Tallis, played by Saoirse Ronan, is a brat of a child who mistakes adult behaviors as ones of depravity instead of what actually happened. She goes on to accuse Robbie of rape, when the real rapist is a friend of the family.

Cecelia Tallis, played by Keira Knightley, is in love with Robbie Turner. Her world is destroyed when her sister, Briony, lies about Robbie. Her family disintegrates because of that lie.

Robbie Turner, played by James McAvoy, is a servant's son and accused of raping a child that he did not. This lie by Briony led him to be convicted and later conscripted into the British military during World War II. Because the young Briony mistook his infatuation and love for her sister out of context.

Atonement is the search for redemption. After 21 novels, the writer, Briony Tallis, is decades older and has now brain disease, she writes her last novel giving her sister and lover the life they both deserved: a long and happy love affair. In all those years, Briony had never forgiven herself for being a headstrong and envious child, but she did nothing to correct her error when it mattered the most: when both Robbie and Cecilia were still alive.


This film has been rated: 7.8/10 Stars on IMDB.

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The Review

Older Briony: So, my sister and Robbie were never able to have the time together they both so longed for... and deserved. Which ever since I've... ever since I've always felt I prevented. But what sense of hope or satisfaction could a reader derive from an ending like that? So in the book, I wanted to give Robbie and Cecilia what they lost out on in life. I'd like to think this isn't weakness or... evasion... but a final act of kindness. I gave them their happiness.
This movie is a beautiful visual masterpiece. There is no argument there. If the audience takes the story on face value, then the narrative is a 10 out of 10 stars all the way. 

Unfortunately, the story has some issues. The conviction of Robbie Turner of rape, would he be eligible for military service, even in wartime? Then there are the timing issues of world events, Dunkirk for instance, that do not match up with what the story shows. There are more discrepancies than these. 

What felt disjointed at the end was an older Briony trying to make up for her lies with rewriting history in a fiction novel that is more autobiographical in nature. Instead of being contrite, she is matter of fact about the whole situation. The interview scene seems off. The editing jumped from here to there. Sometimes the viewer did not know where the story was headed or had been as a matter of the timeline. So when the interview with the older Briony was introduced, the scene felt odd at first.
 
The principle acting is superb. The visual photography and effects are fantastic. The narrative is emotionally gripping. However, the facts of the story, from a historical perspective, and editing appear to need some assistance.

For all the awards this film was nominated for and won, Atonement has its flaws.


Watched free on Prime Video.

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The Tally 

My review will be posted on Prime as well as IMDB. 

Prime... 4 out of 5 stars

IMDB... 8 out of 10 stars 

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The Writer's Workshop

Movies for Writers: Atonement is a period piece that tells an endearing love story but also a narrative of anger, jealousy, and regret.

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For more Movie Reviews, check out Undawnted's Critiques and Reviews page as well as her IMDB and Amazon Prime profiles.


Have a great and wonderful day.

 

Sunday, September 27, 2020

Two Nominations on My Poetry Forum for the poem: Pretend

Poetry allows the writer to expand on ideas and philosophies. Pretend is such a poem about Existentialism. The poem is a mirror with which to see ourselves and our current status in religion, politics, and our own personal embodiment.
 
Pretend seems to spark that same sentiment in others as the poem was nominated twice on a poetry site.

The poem has garnered accolades including: "It's the best poem I have ever read" on a forum that has since closed.  

Thank you so very much.

If you would like to read the poem for yourself and leave a review, then please head on over to Undawnted's YouTube Channel.

Have a great and wonderful day. 
 

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Thursday, July 23, 2020

My Poetry Forum Nominations for Rabbit Hole

Poetry is a great way to express yourself and when others give you a thumbs up, that is great as well. Rabbit Hole, was nominated once on My Poetry Forum for its candor and verse.

Thank you so very much.

Have a great and wonderful day. 
 
This poem is being moved to Undawnted's YouTube Channel.
 
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Subscribe for more award-level poems written by DL Mullan.

 

 




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